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there are days when words are all I have

words sliding letter by letter from the
end of a pencil, turning blank white paper

into pieces of me,

pieces that can be packed away
and forgotten

until they’re unearthed in dusty
shoeboxes and yellowed notebooks

where someone will find me

when the words are all that’s left
#80 in the 100 Themes Challenge - Words
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kanutsute Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2008
That is so true! I really like this poem!
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much! :hug:
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zilzalisme Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2008
i love this
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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i-lie Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008
.. Wow! It's so short and simple and Great!!
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :hug:
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i-lie Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2008
You're much welcom!
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NightFriend Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
This piece is definitely one of the best I've read from you yet. This really hits to the core of what I've been feeling when I listen to old 78 records and the ghost of nostalgia gets heavy. Very awesome.
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much. I'm so glad you like it. :hug:
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BunnyGirl111284 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008
So very true! :+fav:
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