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I like coffee
you like coke
       [we both love caffeine]

I like chocolate
you like vanilla
       [we both love sweetness]

I like fall
you like spring
       [we both love breathing those
            fresh, cool breezes]

I like yours
you like mine
       [we both love smooth skin
                   warmed by hungry hands
                           restless mouths
                              soft sheets]

I think
     we’re going to
           get along
                just fine
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
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More rambling this morning - playing around with placement. :heart:

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:icong2k2007:
=D :clap:

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:iconb1gfan:
Your two recent pieces seem to have a lot of the opposites attracting in them ^_^

the arrangement supports the content very well I think, a little fragmented (maybe breathless; maybe unsure) but not arhythmic or stilted... Why have the last line apart from the rest of that stanza if the overall impression is that everything is coming together fine?...that seems counter to the message. The rest I feel works well with my eyes as I read.:clap:
:iconvisualpoetress:
Great format and love the words :hug:

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:iconblueskye27:
You think these things through so much more logically than I do, Dave. :aww:

I think you're right. See if this works better. Thanks again. :hug:
:iconelemenestra:
oh that's just soo sweet :heart: :love:

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:iconelemenestra:
you are wekcome :glomp: it's very nice work

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:iconb1gfan:
bingo is it's name-o

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