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he went back to nights
to buy a blue ray

and her patience gave out
like retreads in July

as she watched her
children sleeping
hp's prompt: uprising
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hamletspants Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008
:cry:
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008
Blue ray?
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
A fancy DVD player.
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:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008
A neat little third person scenario, sketched with your customary economy :clap:

(I wondered if it was a fish?)
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Alec. :hug:
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008
And you told me you couldn't do the third person? :cuddle:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
See, I'm listening... :aww:
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008
:heart:
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Malandante Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting... I like
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:iconpseudometry:
pseudometry Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008   Writer
This is quite clever.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Jamie. :hug:
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:iconspectrumchaser:
Spectrumchaser Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008
"and her patience gave out
like retreads in July"

This is a great line! Succinctly put :nod:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :hug:
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:iconatbarnett:
atbarnett Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
Love that line about patience!
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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one-dryad Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
jedi, indeed. :phew: no more sith: Galen i, please reference force unleashed: [link]

i cherish you, dear c. :clap: thankies for all of your compassion , love , and support :hug:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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TyC113 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
nice.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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:icontyc113:
TyC113 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
No problem.
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:iconwhoapony:
whoapony Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008
Wow. What an uprising. Not that either one of us would know anything about that. :)
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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:iconwhoapony:
whoapony Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
:hug:
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Simply-Simon Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:clap: deviously fantastic :D
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Simply-Simon Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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