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for one
brightly lit
   moment

we loved

now I dream
but darkly

on a bed of
   promises
      unmade
The lovely image was created by :icontime-warrior:. It's an honor that this poem inspired such a beautiful piece. Thanks, Peggy. :hug:
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010  Student Writer
don't know how i missed this poem the first time around...but i got it now:) :hug:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I rather like this one. I'm glad you do, too. :hug:
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deinktvis Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010  Student Writer
:hug:
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GingerSpice019 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2010
Congratulations on the DLD! You deserve it. :)
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :hug:
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:icongingerspice019:
GingerSpice019 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010
You're welcome! :)
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:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
Congratulations, Cindy.

But you've a whole gallery full of poems deserving special recognition!
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Alec. :hug:
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:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
:heart:
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londonrey Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
Oh, wow, the ending is just perfect!!! Wow. :heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Love wow's. Thanks. :hug:
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:iconlondonrey:
londonrey Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
You're welcome!!
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for featuring my work. I'm honored. :heart:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2010
It was our pleasure.
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1Walkingblind Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
The abstractness of this is exquisite. This poem holds a lot of maturity and the simple intelligence of it is stunning. It's like poetical scenery! Great job!
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
What a lovely, thoughtful comment. Thank you very much. :hug:
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:icon1walkingblind:
1Walkingblind Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
My pleasure :)
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:iconmelodythelittlepony:
melodythelittlepony Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2009
Just beautiful... It really is a poem where both images and emotions connect in the most meaningful way!
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I rather like this one myself. Thank you. :aww:
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Succinct beauty. :heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :hug:
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TwistedAlyx Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I like this one. :heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. I rather like this one myself. :heart:
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:icontwistedalyx:
TwistedAlyx Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome. :)
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:iconlordbeazy:
lordbeazy Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009
A few words that say much. I admire and enjoy the brevity. :)
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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:iconlordbeazy:
lordbeazy Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009
Welcomies. :rose:
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TheSnowInMyHand Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2009
Heartachingly beautiful.

:+devwatch: :+fav:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :hug:
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:iconhamletspants:
hamletspants Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009
"on a bed of
promises
unmade"

brilliant double image here. Love it.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Love that word brilliant... thanks, Kev.
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hamletspants Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2009
Deserved. Very and easily welcome.
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:icontuishimi:
Tuishimi Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009
:thumbsup:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:w00t:
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time-warrior Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
:hug:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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iheldyoucloser Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
heartbreakingly beautiful.



ifeelthesameway
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I hope it's better soon. :hug:
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:icondeeclear:
deeclear Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
This was a beautiful piece. So sad.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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:icondeeclear:
deeclear Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
welcome
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2009
Spare and melancholy, the mode of regret you do so well.

The last stanza situates your protagonist so well, as metaphor and mundane detail merge.
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
What a lovely comment. Thanks, Alec. :hug:

It seems a long time since we've talked. How are you?
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:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009
you're right, it does seem along time. I'mthriving, and the near future is crammed with plans!!
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thriving is magnificent! :w00t:
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:iconloverz116:
loverz116 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
short, sad, and amazing. :]
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :hug:
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loverz116 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009
anytime. :heart:
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
*grins* You are still writing so well
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