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I’ve been told that I feel
too much

internalize, project, empathize
too much

laugh, cry, care
too much

want, need, love
too much

sometimes it makes me hurt
too much

but as I seem to be defined by
too much

anything less just wouldn’t
be me
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
:iconblueskye27:

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#6 in ~cypriphobia's June Prompt Challenge - Too Much

This isn't where I meant to go with this prompt, but I've gotten so tired, I seem to have become a bit self-absorbed. :hmm:

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:iconvisualpoetress:
I've been told that too :) But I gotta be "me" ..... I am how I am ... giggle that sounds a little like Popeye :rofl:

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:iconpardonm3:
I once read somewhere that poets would be at a loss without the words 'you' and 'I'.
It's hard to avoid writing about yourself. Don't worry 'bout it. ;)
Nice use of effective repetition.
:iconpurpleginger:
very good. very much me. you're amazing.
:iconachaoticmess:
I really like this one. Its just flows really well and makes a lot of sense... yay!

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At the heart of life is a void without purpose or meaning. There is no God. There is no love. All is emptiness and loneliness. Since time began, you have been abandoned.

The Chronicles of Faerie- The Hunter's Moon.... O.R. Melling
:icondeadthoughiseemalie:
too much is the story of my life and I would be a complete loss if that was taken away...so don't change I like you just the way you are...:D

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I just wanna say good bye, Disappear with no one knowing
I don't wanna live this lie, smiling to the world unknowing
I don't want you to try, you've done enough to keep me going
I'll be fine, I'll be fine, I'll be fine for the very last time
:iconblueskye27:
Thanks, Danielle. You, too. :hug:
:iconblueskye27:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :hug:

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