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he blames the Mexicans
  for his present
    unemployment

but I can smell the booze
   from five feet away

at 3:00 on a Tuesday
      afternoon
C.
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Corrupthoughts Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2009
short and sweet... yet for me, a sad relation to someone close. You connect well with your readers, I would say.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry if you have someone close in this situation. :hug:
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:iconcorrupthoughts:
Corrupthoughts Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2009
Thank-you.. truly appreciate that. But glad to say, not so much anymore.
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Spectrumchaser Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2009
I find your title interesting. It makes me wonder. Is he really "surviving"....?
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
He thinks he is...
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Spectrumchaser Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2009
So many people do...sadly.
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grieverwings Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I really like how "Mexican" and "Tuesday" are the only things capitalized - I don't know, that sort of stood out for me. :)

It is very upsetting, though. People like this are... sad.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, they are. :(
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AndromedaII Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
Yes, I've know people like that. Sad.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, it is. :nod:
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hala-sayuri Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
That made me giggle. It shouldn't- I have a messed up since of humor, and I know that. But. xD
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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:icon1001g:
1001G Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
its never our own fault is it......
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
No...
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1001G Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
it hard to take blame for our own actions....
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:iconwhoapony:
whoapony Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
Heh. I've known a few people like this
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
It's sad, isn't it? :(
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:iconwhoapony:
whoapony Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
:nod: very
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johohanna Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
Kinda sad =(

I love the way you paint an entire story in so few words :heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
He is a rather sad person.

Thank you. :hug:
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atbarnett Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
Very telling...
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
My neighbor...
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:icontyc113:
TyC113 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome. I like it.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, man. :hug:
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:icontyc113:
TyC113 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome.
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