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they stayed
together for
the children

who grew
up afraid
to marry
#57 in the 100 Themes Challenge - Sacrifice
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Shewroteinblue Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
excellent poem! it's very true.
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misslomax Featured By Owner May 20, 2008
wow.
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner May 20, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I love wows....thanks. :hug:
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misslomax Featured By Owner May 22, 2008
lol no problem! xx
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ColonelFitz Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008
Wow. :wow: This one's really good! I don't have much to say, besides, so sad, but so true...
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2008
Ironic brevity.

But such paradoxes are always more visible from the outside, which is indeed the poem's perspective.

The poet arrives at a destination. The novelist finds herself at the entrance to the maze.
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Alec. :hug:
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DarkLiterature Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008
either it's out of wedlock, or out of the love they had for their kids.

interesting musing.
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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