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like a hothouse creation,
our time proved short

          I was redolent, ripe
          as a summer day

    yours for the asking

              you had only to
              reach out your hand

and take me

                but you hesitated,

      left me on the vine
      too long,
      
            my fullness wasted
            in unrequited heat

and now

          our time is past
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
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Mmm, I like it. ;P
And I particularly like the visual effect.
I know the feeling :hug:


Expressed very well indeed. you told the story with imagery, hope, and acceptance. Perhaps with a glint of resentment that it didn't happen? I don't know.

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Dum spiro spero.
i missed opportunity.........:( :iconroseplz: nicely written cindy

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