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love words
hide behind
my teeth like
stolen pennies

stashed under
my tongue until
the taste leeches
into my blood
like the poison
of your
forgetting

I swallow
them

bitter
little pills
burning like
bad liquor

that turn
my heart

to ash
Just trying to write...
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:iconprettycrazy:
PrettyCrazy Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Trying?!
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PagesOfDreams Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010   Writer
Woah. Pennies must be hard to swallow. :O

Wonderful poem.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, painful I think. :nod:
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meljoy68 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Trying and succeeding. I could taste the words...
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things-i-have-loved Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Student General Artist
heartbreaking. :heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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royalocean Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009  Professional Writer
Featured here [link]
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:iconthetaoofchaos:
thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2009   Writer
the poison
of your
forgetting


i can taste it.

:heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Shane. :hug:
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loverz116 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009
[link] featured! :heart:
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