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fealty

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with weariness
you turn to the
coming tempest

your face etched
with enduring, your shoulders
tense with accepting

I watch you
ready yourself for the
menacing pain

and I weep

I cannot stop
the baying winds that
threaten, the

shrieking fury
that nears, my impotence
total, complete

but I will not
run; if you must meet
this unbending

tomorrow,

you will not welcome it

alone
This started with *hamletspants' prompt "stalwart" but took on a life of it's own as I thought of my friend Carole...

This poem is dedicated to my dear friend :icone-cj:. :heart:

Our friend Simon (=eluk) has made a recording of this poem. If you'd like to listen, it's found here:

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Spectrumchaser's avatar
Such a beautiful, heartfelt, heart-wrenching poem. Your word choices are very powerful: tempest, enduring, menacing, shrieking fury, unbending.

You show the agony of the situation, and also the fortitude with which it is faced. What a supportive tribute to your friend. :hug: