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he was a
wish
unfulfilled,
gone
before she could
learn the truth
of him

yet, still
he lingers
within her heart,
a dream
untested
that will not
die
©2009 *Blueskye27
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Beautiful.

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Band geek and proud of it! :heart:

(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
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Cindy,

what beautiful rythm
no unusual words
no surprises
except

a message
perfectly told

Is surprising

the best way for me to learn
is to immediately try to copy.

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pip

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when a man refers to the woman,
[who chose him], as his better half,
for once, he tells the truth. - llp - nov'09
:icontyc113:
Beautiful. Absolutely.

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Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconb1gfan:
Ahh the dream untested - is a dream a lie if it doesn't come tru or is it something worse? It takes The Boss to ask such questions - and you :D
:iconblueskye27:
I was just thinking about how often a dream that people can't let go of is one that never got a good dose of reality, especially romantically speaking, you know? I'm glad it came through the way I meant it to. Thanks, Dave. :hug:
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Thanks, Ty. I'm so glad you like it. :hug:
:iconpraytell:
' a tale of star-crossed lovers' eh? :) very subtle, very lovely, very cindy :hug:
:icontyc113:
Welcome, Cindy. It is awesome.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconniamhsnotion:
BEAUTIFUL...:heart:

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Wunden aus früheren Zeiten bluten in der Gegenwart

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