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he was a
wish
unfulfilled,
gone
before she could
learn the truth
of him

yet, still
he lingers
within her heart,
a dream
untested
that will not
die
:heart:
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:iconmuertomushroom:
MuertoMushroom Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010   Writer
:+favlove:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2009
The purgatory of regret.

He and She playing their endless game of hide and seek, and both of them losing.

Depicted with your usual economy :heart:
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:iconprettycrazy:
PrettyCrazy Featured By Owner May 26, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:

I like the untested dream. And how it'll never have a chance to die.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner May 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Funny how our minds work, isn't it?
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:iconprettycrazy:
PrettyCrazy Featured By Owner May 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Crazy.

But probably all for the best.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner May 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I think so. :)
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:iconryugekko:
RYUGEKKO Featured By Owner May 12, 2009
again
i read it

chilled

amazing, what the mind does with pain, turned bittersweet.
i rant
sry

this is a great piece
i will read it again
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:iconryugekko:
RYUGEKKO Featured By Owner May 12, 2009
this gave me a chill
- reminds me of a time
I once
had
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:iconwolfenfire:
WolfenFire Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
Very beautiful :)
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:iconrivaleka:
Rivaleka Featured By Owner May 2, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
Oh if I could double favorite this, I would... How I love this one so... :heart:
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:iconeatingmyownfears:
EatingMyOwnFears Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2009
wonderful! :hug:
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:iconspectrumchaser:
Spectrumchaser Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2009
Lovely work Cindy, and so much truth contained there.

The loves remembered fondly and eternally are often those barely born.
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:iconfemluc:
femluc Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009
I love it :clap:
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:iconwingsoftears:
WingsOfTears Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
How true this can be ... sometimes when someone leaves us before we really find out what they are like it makes it so much harder to let them go.
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:iconjessicaconk:
jessicaconk Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
It Short and beautiful and deeply true. :heart:
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:iconalleyana:
Alleyana Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I have an untested, undead dream in my heart.

But sometimes, firing missiles off without pointing them first is a bad idea.

Missile test ranges can be dangerous.
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XxLonesomeDovexX Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009
:clap:
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:iconartfly101:
artfly101 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009
that was really good:)
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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:iconartfly101:
artfly101 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009
your welcome:)
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:iconsimply-simon:
Simply-Simon Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderfully evocative of a youthful encounter :hug:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Simon.
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Simply-Simon Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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:iconwhydoidothiseveryday:
short, but lovely
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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MutedIllusion Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009
Love this.
I can relate to it so well.
That feeling of losing something before it should be lost.
Lovely. :+favlove:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Dora. I'm glad you liked it. :heart:
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Nexztone Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Student Writer
Beautiful :D :heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :hug:
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:iconniamhsnotion:
Niamhsnotion Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009
BEAUTIFUL...:heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :hug:
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:iconpraytell:
praytell Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009
' a tale of star-crossed lovers' eh? :) very subtle, very lovely, very cindy :hug:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Very Cindy...yup, yup, yup. :)
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Student Writer
Ahh the dream untested - is a dream a lie if it doesn't come tru or is it something worse? It takes The Boss to ask such questions - and you :D
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I was just thinking about how often a dream that people can't let go of is one that never got a good dose of reality, especially romantically speaking, you know? I'm glad it came through the way I meant it to. Thanks, Dave. :hug:
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:iconb1gfan:
b1gfan Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Student Writer
And thank you Cindy :) for all the wonderfulness you bring! :hug:
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:icontyc113:
TyC113 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. Absolutely.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Ty. I'm so glad you like it. :hug:
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:icontyc113:
TyC113 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome, Cindy. It is awesome.
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alapip Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Cindy,

what beautiful rythm
no unusual words
no surprises
except

a message
perfectly told

Is surprising

the best way for me to learn
is to immediately try to copy.

:heart:
pip
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Copy away, pip. I'm pleased you liked it. :hug:
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:iconalapip:
alapip Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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forWinds Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
Beautiful.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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