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hello

you’ll be glad to know
that I hardly ever
think of you
anymore

my nights are
no longer sleepless,
my eyes red-rimmed
and puffy

I’m over you
at last, emptiness
a tired relief
from pain

yes, I don’t
miss you
anymore

   but my number
     hasn’t changed if
       you ever need to
         reach me
©2009 *Blueskye27
:iconblueskye27:

Author's Comments

C.

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:iconiampoetry:
Wonderful as always. You remind me of the simple things and real life.

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Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
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my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconjust-joking:
Aww ;)

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:frail: "lovehurts" but "always somewhere" there's "stairway to heaven" :frail:
:iconunderworldriver:
very sweet, yet tart. though quite refreshing.

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
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Remember we all have =RawEm0tion :blackrose:
I am a proud member of ~lyriclub B-)
:iconunderworldriver:
very sweet, yet tart. though quite refreshing.

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~Save me from my fears, save my butterflies and love me forever, my beloved Styx~
--------------
Remember we all have =RawEm0tion :blackrose:
I am a proud member of ~lyriclub B-)
:iconloverz116:
wow...this is an amazing poem. One of your best.

I love how tough and secure the lover seems to be in the beginning but in the end, you can see the lover is still vulnerable. i love it.

:heart:
:iconmalandante:
Simple and beautiful :heart:

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The cold sensation of steel, upon my skin sends a shiver down my spine.
:iconmeljoy68:
Ah...the ending was perfect. I hate myself for that weakness. Severing the ties sounds great in theory. But what if?

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"Music rots when it gets too far from the dance. Poetry atrophies when it gets too far from music."

~Ezra Pound
:iconerene:
No longer in pain, yet still keeping your heart open....thats wonderful Cindy!
:iconpraytell:
*sigh* lovely, lady. :hug:

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