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hello

you’ll be glad to know
that I hardly ever
think of you
anymore

my nights are
no longer sleepless,
my eyes red-rimmed
and puffy

I’m over you
at last, emptiness
a tired relief
from pain

yes, I don’t
miss you
anymore

   but my number
     hasn’t changed if
       you ever need to
         reach me
C.
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Autumnleaves1321 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Really love this :) So nice xx
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savedbythespell Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
I can relate so much to this! Beautiful!
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2009
She leads her complicated life, this lady of yours. Lots of weary reflection.

She's fortunate to have so perceptive a chronicler :hug:
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frazzled-mage Featured By Owner May 20, 2009
....fricking perfectly captured. :bow:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner May 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, James. :hug:
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PrettyCrazy Featured By Owner May 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Awww. Noone gets spared from that one, do they...

I'm quite jealous of your talent to evocate the small emotions we all felt at one point.
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner May 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
What a lovely compliment. Thanks, An. :hug:
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Spectrumchaser Featured By Owner May 6, 2009
Nicely said! This one made me smile at the end, because I've felt that exact same way.

I'm wondering about the wording in your second stanza though. The part where you say "my eyes red-rimmed and puffy" made me think that your eyes are that way right now. But on second reading I understood that you meant your eyes aren't that way anymore. Maybe a little rewording would help clarify. (I'm a little fried right now anyway so it might also be that I'm not reading it right!)

Otherwise, a signature Cindy piece with so much emotion expressed so very well. :heart:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner May 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I'll have to go back and check it again. Thanks, Julie. :hug:

Still pulling those eleven hour days?
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Spectrumchaser Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
You're welcome!

Yeah - the days are long. I think once we adjust to the new workloads everyone will settle into a rhythm. We just have to find our groove again.
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