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Vacation by *Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open


You only answered
one of my emails.

I have to face it.

You’re gone.

No one’s this busy, and
vacations don’t last

that long.
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
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#21 in the 100 Theme Challenge - Vacation
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Mood: Joy *b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Mar 27, 2008, 6:33:26 PM
The darkening turn is taken...the rose broken, the body departed, the heart removed...where will our dear speaker go from here Cindy?
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Mar 27, 2008, 6:39:04 PM
I suspect the poor girl has a few more knocks to take before the sun shines again (if one drifts down a bit in the list). Hoo, boy. :hmm:

I do think it's good for my poor old mind though. To go from blood to rainbow to gray to fortitude to VACATION? Honestly! And now Mother Nature?!? Phew! I'm starting to see what people don't connect them... Still, it's kinda fun. :aww:
=Prosaic-Scriptor:iconProsaic-Scriptor: Mar 27, 2008, 6:56:35 PM
Oh wow, this is really good....... This sounds like my kinda poetry! Not that the rest of yours wasn't... hee.

--
"...for what I had heard was true:
That a poet only writes about the things he cannot do."
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Mar 27, 2008, 6:58:53 PM
It's all the best of Madlibs and connect the dots and six degrees of separation, and the writers' warm ups...do you look ahead much (down the list toward the future) or are you staying in the daily moment?
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Mar 27, 2008, 7:06:18 PM
I only look one or two ahead or I'd probably be really worried about now...
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Mar 27, 2008, 7:07:32 PM
So glad you like it. Thanks. :hug:
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Mar 27, 2008, 7:13:40 PM
I myself would be entirely overwhelmed by now if I looked even three ahead.
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Mar 27, 2008, 7:21:46 PM
So, you gonna give it a try?
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Mar 27, 2008, 7:28:18 PM
Oh no...the OCD in me would go bonkies with that kind of work ahead of it.

There lies madness!
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