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The lines blur with decisions
Right or wrong? Left or right?
Which path is my salvation
My guiding light?
Which leads me toward temptation?
Will I get lost in regrets when I manage
To resurface?
Or will the darkness crave my adoration?

And which are you
who tempts me most?
In you, will I find
the wholeness that
I seek, or will I
drown in this darkness
I crave to adore?


Which will be my ending
The period at the last of my life story?
Cause really all this second guessing
Is reducing all the glory.
How can I hope to take the road of
greatness when I'm tangled in the essence
Of life's bitter possession, sin.

Or perhaps greatness
is birthed in the
bitterness of the
road, in finding the
essence of  
myself as I
search for
you.
A collaboration with Corissa, aka :iconladyshadowrage:. Her verses are in regular print, mine in italics. You guys go check her out! Thanks, Corissa!
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topfiverecordsInc Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2009
you two work so well together!
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Malandante Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
This is stunning :heart:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Alli. :)
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Malandante Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :hug:
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CollabLit Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009
Your wonderful collaboration piece has been added to our collection on ~CollabLit. Please visit our club and peruse our pieces!

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Good luck in your writing, and keep collaborating! :)
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Student Writer
Jack Kerouac would agree with you about that old road there Cindy - :) May yours never be too dark or bitter :hug:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Nor yours, my buddy. :hug:
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009  Student Writer
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Rivaleka Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I simply love it. Good job to the both of you! =D
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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