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Like a fig ripened in the
soft summer sun
plucked by rough,
unchurched hands,
I find my sweetness eaten
from the inside out
until there’s nothing left
but skin.
another for the prompt word "rough" in ~cypriphobia's July Prompt Challenge
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1001G Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
and dont ever let that happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:hug::hug::hug:
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1001G Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
awwwww.......all those sweet hugs
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Prosaic-Scriptor Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:w00t:
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Prosaic-Scriptor Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww:
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isobellefox Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
I love that you can do so much with so few words. Its awe inspiring : )
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, sweet. :hug:
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ColonelFitz Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008
Very nice imagery! I mean...I didn't see anything... :roll:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Eyes closed! :aww:
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pardonM3 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
'unchurched' - now that's an adj. I don't hear too often.
Tasty.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not completely sure it's actually a word...well, I guess it is now. ;p
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pardonM3 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008
=D
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sunhorse-creations Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Professional Artisan Crafter
You'll have to become a fig:) Blue:)



Maybe even a Fig Newton :)


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"Sunhorse":)
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmm....I like cookies. :D
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sunhorse-creations Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2008  Professional Artisan Crafter
Cookie Monster :)


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"Sunhorse":)
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forWinds Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Imagery, just wow.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :hug:
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hamletspants Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008
Love it!
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, hp. :hug:
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008   Writer
beautiful

xo!
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Shane. :hug:
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Melanophrionsa Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Rough indeed (chuckles quietly)
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:nod:
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prairiedaisy Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008   Writer
soso sensual.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :hug:
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prairiedaisy Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008   Writer
Not at all. :)
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Student Writer
I must applaud the "unchurched hands" line as well. Very slick indeed :clap:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you liked it. Maybe I should write at three in the morning more often...
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b1gfan Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Student Writer
Perhaps. Come to think of it, I used to love a series written in the L. A. Weekly called "Letters At 3:00 a.m." :D
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I'll have to remember that. :aww:
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Effamay Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008
'unchurched hands' - :clap:

another brilliant piece.

:heart:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Emma. :hug:
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Effamay Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2008
no probs:)
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