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      I’m an opal -

                     not white opal, that
              milksop poser that jewelers
      pawn off as top shelf

       nor the breathtaking
           black opal with its brilliant
                exploding color.

     No, I’m a boulder opal,

                 Koroit,

          Yowah -

             a plain brown stone

                   unassuming

              unspecial.

   But in the right hands,
         the rough falls away,

      and turned to the light

           my rivers of fire

                  burn.
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
:iconblueskye27:

Author's Comments

I have re-done this poem many times now, and this is as close as I've gotten to pleased so far, but I keep struggling with the ending.

Many thanks to =arkansawyer for critiquing it for me.

The picture is a boulder opal pendant that my mother made me. It's quite a rare stone in that it's the mirror image of another one - two halves of a yowah nut. My mother has the other half. Very rare to find two such closely matched opals. :heart:

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:iconarkansawyer:
Err. I fav'd it from the image alone. :) That's a great closeup shot. And a beautiful stone. I don't believe I've ever seen anything like it!!!

(of course - i already read the poem and i'd fav it again for it if I could!!) :glomp: Great job!

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The trail is the thing, not the end of the trail. Travel too fast and you miss all you are traveling for.
Louis L'Amour (1908 - 1988), Ride the Dark Trail
:iconblueskye27:
Thanks, sweetie. I'm glad you like it. Do you think I should try to shrink the image? I was really happy for the detail (my preview pictures don't usually come out that big), but I don't want it to overpower the poem. What do you think?

This is a boulder opal - see what I meant about rivers of fire? :aww:
:iconarkansawyer:
shrink it? heaven's no. To be honest i fav'd it for both... but it needs this size to see the detail in it - and the photo does complement the poem quite well.

a hint on the preview pics. they're limited 'width-wise' so if you have a "portrait" (as opposed to landscape) layout the photo will be larger in display than if it is the other way... err. not sure if that made any sense.

:nod: Yes, I see.. .

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The trail is the thing, not the end of the trail. Travel too fast and you miss all you are traveling for.
Louis L'Amour (1908 - 1988), Ride the Dark Trail
:iconblueskye27:
Oh, I see now. Thanks for explaining. Thanks again for the help. :hug:
:iconarkansawyer:
You're welcome. :hug:

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The trail is the thing, not the end of the trail. Travel too fast and you miss all you are traveling for.
Louis L'Amour (1908 - 1988), Ride the Dark Trail
:iconaussie-blonde:
Thats beautiful!!

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:heart::bookdiva: :hexentanz::excited::kitty::heart:
:heart: Life is precious!!:yawnstretch::omg::wow::omg:
:iconblueskye27:
Thanks! All the best opals are from Australia, you know. :aww:
:iconaussie-blonde:
oh yes and from up our way too:)

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:heart::bookdiva: :hexentanz::excited::kitty::heart:
:heart: Life is precious!!:yawnstretch::omg::wow::omg:
:icon1001g:
thats my birth stone and i have never seen one this color I have the top shelve one..:rofl:

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:heart: Contentment is not the fulfillment of what you want , but the realization of how much you already have....Anonymous :heart:
:iconmistafantastik:
first and foremost i like the poem alot.......secondly i love the picture

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"so we fix our eyes not on what is seen,
but what is unseen.
for what is seen is temporary,
but what is unseen is eternal."

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