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There’s someone else; you’ll leave me soon.
My fragrant musk runs pale.
You smell like sex in the afternoon.

You read my skin like a brailled rune,
perfumed and dewy frail.
There’s someone else; you’ll leave me soon.

My name a softly-murmured tune
once breathed in love’s true scale.
You smell like sex in the afternoon.

Is she younger, more freshly hewn?
A girl in life’s full sail?
There’s someone else; you’ll leave me soon.

Another’s flesh now makes you swoon;
my scented dream’s gone stale.
You smell like sex in the afternoon.

A summer love born hot in June
the winter has seen to fail.
There’s someone else; you’ll leave me soon.
You smell like sex in the afternoon.
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
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Author's Comments

My first attempt at villanelle, written for *Flutterings and =Mattiello's contest here.

Many thanks for the step-by-step instructions on How to Write Villanelles by mattiello.

Okay, ~Amy--Louise, I did it! :heart:

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:iconvisualpoetress:
OH WOW !! It is awesome and deep. I love it.

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:iconvisualpoetress:
I dropped CJ a note, I featured her in my journal :)

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:iconblueskye27:
That's wonderful. She'll be happy. :w00t:
:iconb1gfan:
:clap: Yea for every word Cindy!
:iconblueskye27:
Thanks, Dave! This villanelle thing is hard! You should try it. :nod:

Thanks again. :hug:
:iconb1gfan:
Hehehehe...I dunno my friend..if it's hard...:shrug: :)
:iconblueskye27:
I found it difficult, I'll admit, but if I can do it, i know you can. :)
:iconb1gfan:
Don't believe it - I have the brain of a mollusk :D To quote Rex Stout. :)
:iconblueskye27:
Ah, but I've read your work my friend, so I'm not falling for that... So sorry. Try again. :aww:

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