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I want someone

      (to take care of me).

Don’t misunderstand.

I can pay my bills,
fill my car with gas.

I don’t need a man

      (to take out the trash).

I can make my own way.

But now and then
when I’m tired

     (I’m so tired)

it would be nice to
have someone

      (tell me what to do)

when I’m too weary
to figure it out

myself.
:iconhamletspants:'s prompt: regent
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:iconcolonelfitz:
ColonelFitz Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2009
Awww...me, too... :hug:
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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:iconpseudometry:
pseudometry Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2009   Writer
I quite like the sentiment. I think we all can identify with that too, at times. Someone to catch you when you need it.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I think so, too. To have someone take the reins for a while...oh, yeah...
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:iconpseudometry:
pseudometry Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2009   Writer
Definitely!
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Spectrumchaser Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009
Interesting take on the word regent. I never would have thought of it this way. I like the way you're using asides in parenthesis.

And boy...do I know just how you feel :hug:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it. Thanks, Julie. :hug:
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Spectrumchaser Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2009
You're welcome :glomp:
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DiamondGirlFL Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009   Writer
I agree....excellent piece... :)
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Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Nina.
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