literature

Promise Me

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I lie among cool sheets
in a dim afternoon
listening to rain
fall, the sounds
it makes tapping
at the windows,
dripping from
the eaves,

and I remember
another afternoon
when you lay here
with me in the
quiet of evening
and whispered
promises in
my hair as
day slid into
night –

promises,
though unkept,
still beautiful in
the making.
I love rain...
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Admantina's avatar
I just pictured this in my mind, and it was beautiful.

:heart:

I haven't read any of your writing for so long, I'd almost forgotten how wonderful it is.