ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
I’ve never been one of those people
that walks around the house naked
with the blinds open,
[tied up in knots by a
good (proper) upbringing].
I’m not even one who walks
around naked with the
blinds closed
[someone might drop by and
catchjudgecondemn me].
In secret, I dream about
padding around the house in
the middle of the day
[in nothing but my
altogether me].
And maybe, just maybe,
I’ll eventually work up
the nerve
[to let the altogether you
walk around with me
until we find something
altogether better
to do].
that walks around the house naked
with the blinds open,
[tied up in knots by a
good (proper) upbringing].
I’m not even one who walks
around naked with the
blinds closed
[someone might drop by and
catchjudgecondemn me].
In secret, I dream about
padding around the house in
the middle of the day
[in nothing but my
altogether me].
And maybe, just maybe,
I’ll eventually work up
the nerve
[to let the altogether you
walk around with me
until we find something
altogether better
to do].
Literature
because I know you're...
you mouth
Bukowski
beautifully
but I'm ready
to try
your own tongue
I'm delighted
you discovered
sex & selfishness
substance(s) & circumstance
excelling at art
excrement & experimentation
exposing your
pretend
private parts
I know how
sometimes
your heart breaks
over the sounds
those empty words make
and everything reminds you
of everything you're not
you're bruised
drowning in booze
and forever in love
with yourself
I get it
now
give me something real
Literature
Control.
Even without teeth we'll find ways to bite
Soak up our water; we'll burn you alive
Religionless minds find hate to praise
And God-loving men have a Father to blame
Put out our fire; you'll smother to death
Burn out our feathers and we'll crush your chest
Abolish disease and cancer of the brain
Someone will find a way to kill you again
You say put up your hands and I say never
Make excuses, excuses
And we'll never get better
Literature
Make Me Feel
And there are times that I love you
(( So much ))
That it's not even
love
anymore.
It becomes a c.r.e.a.t.u.r.e.
Something
So very
ALIVE
That lives in my insides
That
((Crawls))
Up my throat
Stretches
My mouth
And
CLIMBS
out into the world
With fingers like branches
And
e.y.e.s.
like
diamonds
And it feels
All the things I
WANT
to feel
((but don't))
And there are times
that you make me so
happy
That I have to write it down
So I
never
ever
((forget))
Suggested Collections
© 2008 - 2024 Blueskye27
Comments146
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Poems like this make me wish I had my own place so I could walk around naked whenever I pleased
Great work!
Great work!