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A warm night, I lie in
soft grasses and watch stars
throw themselves through
  eons of darkness
    to reach me.

When I go, spread my ashes
just here, and I’ll make the
grasses thicker and softer
  for the next stargazer
     seeking light
       in the dark.
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
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#87 in the 100 Themes Challenge - Food

**slightly edited the ending
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i love this.

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post-script

mere words can
transcend meaning
(what you think, and write, and say).
haiku becomes
a mantra becomes
the pattern for your day.

-praytell
:hug:

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post-script

mere words can
transcend meaning
(what you think, and write, and say).
haiku becomes
a mantra becomes
the pattern for your day.

-praytell
Softer grass for all who come after...it's a philosophy to live by ^_^
nice :hug:s

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:heart: Contentment is not the fulfillment of what you want , but the realization of how much you already have....Anonymous :heart:
That would be a good thing to do after you've gone.

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And miles from where you are
I lay down on the cold ground
and I
I pray that something picks me up
and sets me down
in your warm arms...

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I thought so, too. :aww:
i love this. it's so serene.

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Here is a lesson in creative writing. First rule: Do not use semicolons. They are transvestite hermaphrodites representing absolutely nothing. All they do is show you've been to college.
Kurt Vonnegut, A Man without a Country

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