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Doubt by *Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Open


If heaven’s all
that I’ve been told
with gates of pearl
and streets of gold,

why did Satan
opt to flee
instead of yield
on bended knee?
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
:iconblueskye27:

Author's Comments

Not meant to offend. Sometimes, I just wonder...

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=XxWreckoningxX Sep 16, 2008, 5:13:56 PM
I wondered that too! =o

--
“Those who dance are considered insane by those who can’t hear the music.”—George Carlin

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=scott2753 Sep 16, 2008, 5:16:21 PM
A thought to ponder - very lovely prose - very well written hon :hug:

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A Dream is but a Fantasy that has not yet been turned into Reality...

ummm - by me :D
:iconarkansawyer:
=arkansawyer Sep 16, 2008, 5:19:32 PM
Did you ever read Job?

(why of course you did)

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The trail is the thing, not the end of the trail. Travel too fast and you miss all you are traveling for.
Louis L'Amour (1908 - 1988), Ride the Dark Trail
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*Blueskye27 Sep 16, 2008, 5:23:49 PM
Yes, I have, but when I think of him actually living in heaven and willingly giving it up...you know?
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~fathertiresias Sep 16, 2008, 5:34:49 PM
Great idea beautifully written!

Really does make you think....

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'Beauty is truth, truth beauty, — that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.'

*The-Literati
~ShortStackStories
:iconironjohnna:
~ironjohnna Sep 16, 2008, 5:35:40 PM
Maybe he hates gold.

Good form and rhyme.

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"I don't know where your dog is, but I think it exploded."
:iconarkansawyer:
=arkansawyer Sep 16, 2008, 5:36:05 PM
I'll note you with my "Job thoughts"... But yeah, I know what you're saying... :nod:

--
The trail is the thing, not the end of the trail. Travel too fast and you miss all you are traveling for.
Louis L'Amour (1908 - 1988), Ride the Dark Trail
:iconscott2753:
=scott2753 Sep 16, 2008, 5:41:40 PM
Awww you are very welcome hon :hug::smooch:

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A Dream is but a Fantasy that has not yet been turned into Reality...

ummm - by me :D
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