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I smile every time
I see him.

He's begun to notice,
smile back.

I really have to
stop this.

He doesn't
understand

that he only
reminds me

of you.
C.
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:iconablondmoment:
aBlondMoment Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010   Writer
*laughs* This one is one of my favorites of all :)
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jessicaconk Featured By Owner May 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You've been featured here: [link]
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EatingMyOwnFears Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
Wow! Great job, Cindy!! :love:
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Miarath Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010
Great job. :)
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silentmood Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2010  Hobbyist
aw ):
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femluc Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
this remind me my current situation :( I love your poetry Cindy :hug:
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010   Writer
so much potential misery; o sweet, sweet misery.

well done.
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WingsOfTears Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
As always an amazing piece hun
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Andrea. :hug:
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:iconb1gfan:
b1gfan Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Student Writer
:D A fabulous (though broken) and inspired take on the prompt!
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Um...which prompt was that, my buddy? :)
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:iconb1gfan:
b1gfan Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Student Writer
Doppelganger :)
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:iconnefex:
Nefex Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
This is really cute :)
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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:iconjessicaconk:
jessicaconk Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
The ending was a twist. The way you write poems is so elegant
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
That's so kind of you. Thank you. :heart:
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TwistedAlyx Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Uh-oh! Great twist. :clap:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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:icontwistedalyx:
TwistedAlyx Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome. ^^
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caybeach Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hi this piece was featured here :aww::heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much, Lynne. :hug:
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caybeach Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
It's my pleasure Cindy :hug:
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1001G Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010
:icongivemesmilesplz:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blowkiss:
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WayneBenedet Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
There is an innocence in your writing that makes me smile.... again.... and again... and again....lol... what can I say... again.... :D
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You lovely man. Thanks. :hug:
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RawPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010   Photographer
wow, well put and very sad.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I love wow's. :)
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:iconjoe-wright:
joe-wright Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010   General Artist
that's beautiful.

perhaps it only resonates with me because i remind her of him too.
bittersweet.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I'm sorry...
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:iconjoe-wright:
joe-wright Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010   General Artist
can't be helped.
i almost started moaning about it all then, i suppose that's proof it's good poetry though, that i can feel connected to it
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:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
Deja vu. No good will come of it!

Fragile and resonant. Your protagonist at her hopeless best. :heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, my protagonist - what am I gonna do with her, Alec? :)
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AlecBell Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
Learn from her mistakes, perhaps?

But keep her busy on the poems :heart:
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
That's good advice. I'm trying to write at least a poem a day. I've got to get back in the groove here. :hug:
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:iconalecbell:
AlecBell Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
I shall try to keep up with reading them :heart:
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:icontuishimi:
Tuishimi Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010
His heart will be broken.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
That's so sweet of you. Thanks. :hug:
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j0rosa Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Aww ;)
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Eye-of-the-Moon Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010
It doesn't say much, but at the same time it does.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
What a nice compliment. Thanks. :hug:
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:iconforwinds:
forWinds Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww I find a deep sadness from this. :(

A moving piece, for sure.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :hug:
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loopy-lexy Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010
Oh wow! Love it. Completely didn't expect that ending.
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:iconblueskye27:
Blueskye27 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you like it. Thanks. :hug:
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