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Can You Hear Me? by *Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27:

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I tied my voice to the wind
and sent it to find you,
to mold the curves of your face,
to linger in your hair,
to trace my words
in your skin, so that you'd
know how much
I love you.
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
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*praytell:iconpraytell: Apr 13, 2008, 7:42:01 PM
this is just beautiful . . . 'tied my voice to the wind'. . . . thats like poetry or somethin :hug:

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post-script

mere words can
transcend meaning
(what you think, and write, and say).
haiku becomes
a mantra becomes
the pattern for your day.

-praytell
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Apr 13, 2008, 7:45:03 PM
Poetry or somethin, huh? Thanks, sweetie. And thanks for the fav. :hug:
*praytell:iconpraytell: Apr 13, 2008, 7:50:50 PM
there you go with that 'sweetie' thing again. . . folks are gonna think i am a nice guy if you keep that up. . . .and we wouldnt want to go misleading the public, now would we? :hug:

--
post-script

mere words can
transcend meaning
(what you think, and write, and say).
haiku becomes
a mantra becomes
the pattern for your day.

-praytell
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Apr 13, 2008, 8:02:43 PM
Well, my students laugh because I forget and will call one of them "Honey," so you can just lay it off on me if you want (though I know the truth myself). :hug:
~trikuti:icontrikuti: Apr 13, 2008, 8:04:14 PM
beautiful, the title also gives it a nice dimension..
=1001G:icon1001G: Apr 13, 2008, 9:07:07 PM
very nicely written ....thats lovely cindy...........:hug:

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:heart: Contentment is not the fulfillment of what you want , but the realization of how much you already have....Anonymous :heart:
=Batticus:iconBatticus: Apr 13, 2008, 9:07:31 PM
Perfection, once again. :)

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R.I.P. Gary C. Sheppard 1958-1998 :heart:
Ilmaisia halauksia!! / Free hugs!! :hug:
Miksi naurat? Onko suomenkieleni niin kehnoa?
*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Apr 13, 2008, 9:07:55 PM
Thanks, Edie. And thanks for the fav. :hug:
=1001G:icon1001G: Apr 13, 2008, 9:09:58 PM
:blowkiss: u r welcome..

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:heart: Contentment is not the fulfillment of what you want , but the realization of how much you already have....Anonymous :heart:
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