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Breathe Again by *Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27:

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It amused him that she held
her breath as she rinsed the
shampoo from her
hair in the shower,

but when she came to him
still damp and sweet-smelling,
it was he who forgot
to breathe.
©2008-2009 *Blueskye27
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=1001G:icon1001G: Mar 23, 2008, 9:23:45 PM
:D

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:heart: Contentment is not the fulfillment of what you want , but the realization of how much you already have....Anonymous :heart:
*praytell:iconpraytell: Mar 24, 2008, 8:08:45 AM
eyes and the stealing of breath, huh. . . .
playin w/ with fire here:)

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mere words can
transcend meaning
(what you think, and write, and say).
haiku becomes
a mantra becomes
the pattern for your day.

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*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Mar 24, 2008, 8:20:41 AM
I love fire almost as much as water...
*praytell:iconpraytell: Mar 24, 2008, 8:22:59 AM
:)

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post-script

mere words can
transcend meaning
(what you think, and write, and say).
haiku becomes
a mantra becomes
the pattern for your day.

-praytell
~Beyond-the-Pages:iconBeyond-the-Pages: Mar 24, 2008, 11:57:50 AM
Oh! Scandal! :giggle: I'm so sick-minded. :XD:

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I've cut my heart out, so you can catch a glimpse of my RawEm0tion

"You have bewitched me body and soul..." - Mr Darcy, Pride and Prejudice (2005)
~Beyond-the-Pages:iconBeyond-the-Pages: Mar 24, 2008, 2:19:59 PM
:D

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I've cut my heart out, so you can catch a glimpse of my RawEm0tion

"You have bewitched me body and soul..." - Mr Darcy, Pride and Prejudice (2005)
*frazzled-mage:iconfrazzled-mage: Mar 24, 2008, 3:32:03 PM
Twas feels a little funny but I think the rest is hot(that said I don't know what to do to make it go away....i like the rest of those two lines so :shrug: ). I mean wet and breathless in the same poem is great. :evillaugh:

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*Blueskye27:iconBlueskye27: Mar 24, 2008, 5:33:58 PM
I had the same feeling about twas, but I couldn't immediately think of anything else to keep the flow I wanted. I'll think on it.

Wet and breathless, huh? Hmmm - I'm gonna have to use that in another one. ;p
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